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valentine's day
East_TX_Spa:
I wish your Peepaw would have been mine, too. Then we'd be family and I could come and visit and stay.
Terminator (longing for a family to love)
Chas:
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Please tell me you have a fireplace there!
Sorry, Chas and Spatech have been ripping apart my posts, so I seized this chance to fire back.
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Actually, that was a fine post Bill. The humor was subtle, almost understated, yet funny. "Fire back" was very close to a pun, but I will assume it was a simple error and not meant as an attempt at piling on humor upon humor.
Your grammar was surprisingly good, your form was clean and appealing. I would say word choice was spot-on, and the meaning came through clearly. I don't usually support the use of exclamation points, as I feel such punctuation marks are a sign of a weak verbal communication, which needs amplification. However, in this case it was bearable, if not completely needed.
Now, let's discuss your use of sentence fragments. I know how hard it is in this day and age to find time to put together a complete thought, let alone write out a complete sentence. But please, for the sake of the language; let's try, shall we? I know you had quoted the original post, so the rest of your sentence can safely be assumed. But what, dear moderator, are we teaching our young posters by this reckless dismissal of the very rules upon which our modern language has its foundation?
Other than that, it was a fine effort. I give you a B+
8-)
galen:
And all this time, I thought you had some sort of skin disease Term. VTD is actually my true birthday. Really! Count 9 months...November 15. I ask my mother about this development that I figured out some time ago. She just said: Hehehe. Thanks Russell Stover, I'm forever indebted :)
Chad:
--- Quote ---And all this time, I thought you had some sort of skin disease Term. VTD is actually my true birthday. Really! Count 9 months...November 15. I ask my mother about this development that I figured out some time ago. She just said: Hehehe. Thanks Russell Stover, I'm forever indebted :)
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I wonder if I was conceived on VTD as well. My B-day is Nov. 20th. I'll have to ask my dad. I doubt he remembers but it couldn't hurt to ask.
Galen, you know what they say about Scorpios?
galen:
Yes, I do. ;) Brook wouldn't have any trouble getting layed if she had a scorpio in the house.
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